bed for several days. I’ll take care of my mother. Thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard. I like it very much. I am going to put it on my desk.
Could I hear from you soon?
Give my best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Han Meimei
利用所学英语知识和题目所给材料写一封英文信。通读全文，可较详细地列出要点：
(1) 你很抱歉，不能去
(2) 原因是母亲生病了
(3) 医生嘱其卧床几日
(4) 你必须照料母亲
(5) 谢谢寄来的明信片，很喜欢
(6) 明信片放在桌上
要注意的是：内容要点不遗漏；时态、语态正确；句子结构正确；符合英文信的格式；单词拼写正确；语句通顺，上下文连贯；字数在60左右。
通过以上分析，再着手开始写，一定会写出一封符合题意要求的英文信来。
优秀作文评析（二）——应用文 3
Miss Jo Hunt和Lily是好朋友。Lily给Jo写信，告诉她自己和双胞胎妹妹在中国学习和生活的情况，并询问对方的汉语学习情况及是否能来中国。
要求：写一篇100词左右的信。
March 5th，2004
Dear Jo:
How are you? I haven’t heard of ① you for a long time.
I’d like tell ② you something about our school life in China. Now we are students of No.4 Middle School. We’re in the same grade, Grade Two, but in different class ③. I’m in Class 1, but Lucy is in Class 4. We go to school five days a week. Every morning, we leave home after a quick breakfast. Classes begin at eight o’clock in the morning. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. We have lunch at school because we all ④ like Chinese food very much.
Our favorite food is dumplings. School is over at about 3 in the afternoon. After school we have sports on the playground. We have made friends with a lot of Chinese children. We teach them English and they teach our ⑤ Chinese. Now we can speak and write a little in Chinese. What about you? By the way, when are you coming to China? Please write to me soon.
Love from: Lily
①from，“收到某人的信”应为hear from。
②to tell，正确的说法是“would like sb. to do sth.”
③classes，既然在不同班级，应该用复数形式。
④both，all表示三者以上的人或物，both表示二者。
⑤us，此处应用宾格形式。
