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2011下半年英语四级高分作文词汇总结
英语四六级高分作文技巧
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we / I （比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ） 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ，therefore， high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals， however， take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good， bad ， many， thing， think，
people， opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper， approaches替换ways， implement替换carry out， sharpen one‘s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I （ By Simmy ）
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present， which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology， computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them， in large measure！
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用

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