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2017年12月全国大学英语四级考试作文真题及解析
四级的题型包括论说文、说明文、记叙文。2017年6月份我们考的是考应用文,卖的是二手车、二手电脑,12月份考的是文字当中的A或者B的形式,到底是工作还是考研,到底是国企还是外企。2017年12月考到的是大家关心的医闹问题,同学感觉到这个问题比较伤感。医闹怎么说?我们可以翻成“医疗的一些问题、争端或者冲突”等等。这是第一套题。第二套题,讲的是所谓的老师和学生之间的关系如何营造。第三套题,父母和孩子的关系。
大家发现这道题从审题的难度来讲基本长没有什么难度,基本上是初中、小学词汇,题干不会出现什么问题。 “How to”题型已经考过三次,重点在如何(how),也就是说我们重点是方法。从内容上来讲,但是发现这三道考题之间的关系是大家非常熟悉的话题,比说医闹关系,医生和患者之间的关系,老师和学生的关系,这是教育的话题,再比如家长和孩子之间的关系等等,所以从题材到内容来说都是四级考生已经必备的知识要素。
我们的四六级的写作满分是15分,包括两部分,第一是奖励分,第二是基本分的部分。
首先,奖励分是卷面的问题,大家都喜欢美的事物。也就是说要保持卷面清晰,给老师留下好的第一印象。第二是基本分。这里包括三部分。
2017年12月英语四级作文:医患关系
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【解析】
题材: 单一命题议论文;
要求: 给建议;
话题: 如何最好地处理医生和病人的关系
观点: 和谐医患关系很重要
方法: 医生提高职业能力;病人提高素质
首段设计:引话题+明主旨
1.众所周知+现状描述,背景介绍。2. 我认为+观点
It is beyond dispute that the increasingly nervous relationship between doctors and patients has triggered a rather widespread concern among the general public, as numerous reports about medical negligence have been unveiled continually. I am of an opinion that there is no more significance than keeping a harmonious physician-patient relation.
中间段设计:方法如下+方法分析
1.方法如下。2. 方法一:提高职业能力。(分析原因结果)3. 方法二:病人要提高素质。(分析原因结果)4. 数据/例子
Several possible measures relating to relieve the tension of doctor-patient relationship are included as follows. For one thing, owing to the fact that doctors in some local hospitals who lack the medical skills are not trusted fully by the public, they ought to improve their occupational qualities to assure the safety of medical work. For another, for patients, they should learn to trust and appreciate doctors because of their professional skills. Take my recent experience in hospital for instance. It was effective communication between me and my surgeon that enabled the operation more smoothly.
结尾段设计:总结+展望
1. 总结。2. 展望
Establishing a doctor-patient trust relationship, all in all, has brought about a series of positive effects on every aspect of life. Only by making collective efforts from both two sides can the relationship be prompted.
【参考范文】
Recent years, the relationship between doctors and patients has been a heated topic. However, with the increasingly serious physician-patient relationship, it is important to find out some ways to solve the problem. Therefore, some measures mentioned below are the most important aspects that we should take into consideration.
On the one hand, it is indispensable that communication between doctor and patients should be strengthened due to the the fact that doctor-patient communication can be seen as a bridge of two-way communication between doctors and patients, which is beneficial for them to improve their relationship. As a matter of fact, although sometimes there are some defects in medical infrastructure, patients can make allowance for them friendly for their good relationship. On the other hand, the most important character doctor should have is professional ethics that is the foremost way to gain trust from patients.
All in all, it is high time that both hospitals and patients should take some steps to deal with current poor relationship. Only in this way, can we create a harmonious society.